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Wednesday, April 29, 2020

My ANZAC story


When i look in the picture, i see a big and tall tower with red flowers on it. I stayed there and i heard people chatting each other. I feel sad because the ANZACS died. The other people are feeling graceful because the ANZACS died for us.


2 comments:

  1. Good start Andy to your writing description, what else can you tell us about what is happening in the picture?
    Miss Gill.

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  2. Hi Andy,

    Nice to read a little bit about the picture. I would be feeling sad also. Could you tell us what the big red flowers are on the tower?

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