Who: Heat wave and Dom.
What: They are fighting.
Where: The moon.
When: Night time.
Why: Because one is a good guy and one is a bad guy.
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Good story Andy, your sentences are simple and include capital letters and full stops. Did you draw your image on the computer? How did you find that?
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My dad helped me do it on his iPad.
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ReplyDeleteWell done on your story ! Great to see you using your imagination. I loved that you ended with your five Ws. I wonder who the new bad guy in town is????
Hi Mrs Simanu the new bad guy in town is going sir seal.
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