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Thursday, April 16, 2020

Writing work

Once upon a time their was a Peron called Heat wave .And a bad guy called Dom . They fight every day.But they never sleep.Once heat wave flyed  to the moon with his fire rocket ship. Dom went to moon with his slime rocket ship. Dom saw heat wave and heat wave saw Dom . So they being the battle.Heat wave use fire ball.Dom goes under ground to doge it. Dom use slime rain. But Heat wave use shred.Heat wave use fire flag.It broke one of Dom arms. Dom use poison breath. But Heat wave use fire breath.Now Dom lose one of his eyes. Dom use slime beam. Heat wave use fire beam .Heat wave won the battle. Heat wave went back home and a rest. And then he goes to sleep.Next day he ate his breakfast and then he watch the news. The news said their was a new bad guy in town.



Who: Heat wave and Dom.
What: They are fighting.
Where: The moon.
When: Night time.
Why: Because one is a good guy and one is a bad guy.



4 comments:

  1. Good story Andy, your sentences are simple and include capital letters and full stops. Did you draw your image on the computer? How did you find that?
    Miss Gill.

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    1. My dad helped me do it on his iPad.

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  2. Hi Andy
    Well done on your story ! Great to see you using your imagination. I loved that you ended with your five Ws. I wonder who the new bad guy in town is????

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  3. Hi Mrs Simanu the new bad guy in town is going sir seal.

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