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Monday, May 4, 2020

Writing week 4

I would choose on land because i can't breathe under water. I choose on land because i don't want the sharks to eat me. I choose on land because i can buy things. I choose on land because i can eat there.


 I choose on land because i can go everywhere. I choose on land because i want to see my friends. I choose on land because i can the wild animais.


  I choose on land because i can stay safe on land. I choose on land so i can play with my friends. I choose on land because i can live in my house. I choose on land because i have a beautiful garden. I choose on land  because i can work there. I choose on land because i can buy drinks.



2 comments:

  1. Well done Andy,
    Do you want to send me your planning template on google doc. You have made some great arguments about land and sea. I look forward to reading your writing.
    Miss Gill.

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  2. Hi Andy,

    All very good reasons why you would choose land. I would rather have land than sea too. I wouldn't want sharks eating me either.
    Was the choice just between land and sea?

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